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Uchiha Kagami

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PostSubject: Hiding in Surface Technique [CANON]   Hiding in Surface Technique [CANON] Icon_minitimeThu Feb 04, 2016 2:53 am



Name ;; Hiding in Surface Technique
Rank ;; A
Type ;; ninjutsu
Element ;; none
Range ;; self
Power ;; 4
Speed ;; 4
Cool Down;; 4 posts
Description ;;
With this technique, the user can phase through their surroundings, allowing them to quickly avoid an incoming attack and can travel undetected as well. The user can from this position execute a surprise attack to their enemy.

The user is able to maintain this effect for a decent amount of time (4 posts), and in this time the user is able to move through the surface that they are hiding in at a speed equal to the power of the jutsu
Requirements ;; Ninjutsu as Dominant Spec


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PostSubject: Re: Hiding in Surface Technique [CANON]   Hiding in Surface Technique [CANON] Icon_minitimeThu Feb 04, 2016 4:56 am

Heyo Kagami, overall this is a great app, there are only 2 things that I can see that need to be expanded upon or changed

1. Could you please add in a distance as to how far the user can travel through this technique, cause as it is the user of the technique would be able to travel basically any distance

2. Could you please change this to a Ninjutsu Dominant spec rather than a Ninjutsu Main spec, it just doesn't strike me as the kind of technique that would require a Nin main spec
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding in Surface Technique [CANON]   Hiding in Surface Technique [CANON] Icon_minitimeThu Feb 04, 2016 10:46 am

Thanks Shin ^_^

1. Made it only last for the 1 post, so the user can travel virtually as far as they could move normally in that time, with this technique - it didn't seem to fit the flavour to give it a distance restriction... but we can do that if you think it still needs tweaking.

2. changed~
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding in Surface Technique [CANON]   Hiding in Surface Technique [CANON] Icon_minitimeThu Feb 04, 2016 11:11 am

Awesome, I think I prefer the one post duration to a travel restriction anyway, it just works better for this technique in general, so without further ado

Kagami wrote:


Name ;; Hiding in Surface Technique
Rank ;; A
Type ;; ninjutsu
Element ;; none
Range ;; self
Power ;; 4
Speed ;; 4
Cool Down;; 4 posts
Description ;;
With this technique, the user can phase through their surroundings, allowing them to quickly avoid an incoming attack and can travel undetected as well. The user can from this position execute a surprise attack to their enemy.

The user can maintain this effect for only a few seconds - what would amount to the duration of 1 post, travelling only a short distance in the process.
Requirements ;; Ninjutsu as Dominant Spec

I approve of this
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PostSubject: Re: Hiding in Surface Technique [CANON]   Hiding in Surface Technique [CANON] Icon_minitimeWed Feb 17, 2016 1:30 am

Some changes have been made as per a discussion between Kagami and myself
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