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Subject: [Canon] Coercion Sharingan Sat Jan 23, 2016 5:01 pm
• Name ;; Coercion Sharingan • Rank ;; A • Type ;; Genjutsu • Element ;; - • Range ;; 10 meters • Power ;; 4 • Speed ;; 4 • Cool Down;; 4 posts • Description ;; With a single glance of the Sharingan, this technique forces a nightmarish genjutsu on the victim, overpowering them and bringing them to their knees. Even the usually emotionless will be deeply effected by this genjutsu.
• Requirements ;; Sharingan
Last edited by Stein on Mon Feb 01, 2016 1:09 am; edited 2 times in total
Esdeath
Posts : 20 Join date : 2015-11-18
Subject: Re: [Canon] Coercion Sharingan Sun Jan 31, 2016 8:42 pm
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With a single glance of the Sharingan.
Such a powerful genjutsu won't be activated instantly by a single glance. Either change the time it takes for activation or how powerful it is.
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This technique forces a nightmarish genjutsu on the victim, overpowering them and bringing them to their knees.
Also don't like this line cause of the power playing aspect.
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Even the usually emotionless will be deeply by this genjutsu.
Grammar.
Chouki
Posts : 260 Join date : 2015-11-06 Location : Jokigakure
Subject: Re: [Canon] Coercion Sharingan Mon Feb 01, 2016 1:11 am
Desu Yuki wrote:
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With a single glance of the Sharingan.
Such a powerful genjutsu won't be activated instantly by a single glance. Either change the time it takes for activation or how powerful it is.
Quote :
This technique forces a nightmarish genjutsu on the victim, overpowering them and bringing them to their knees.
Also don't like this line cause of the power playing aspect.
Quote :
Even the usually emotionless will be deeply by this genjutsu.
Grammar.
Fixed the Grammar, changed the power, and effect is as it is from Wiki, and wish to keep think Wiki
Esdeath
Posts : 20 Join date : 2015-11-18
Subject: Re: [Canon] Coercion Sharingan Fri Feb 05, 2016 10:18 am
Should have mention it was canon. Will change the title to suit.